Der mangler en call to action. Hvad så når jeg har læst hele teksten? Hvad skal jeg? Ringe til min egen advokat - eller kontakte jer? Lav en kontaktformular under de dele af teksten, hvor I mener "nu er læseren klædt ordentligt på til at ta' en beslutning".
Thank you for the videoreview - it had some good points. My only problem with removing a big part of the text is google. We currently rank #1 on the word "inkasso", and that is proberbly the single most important marketing advantage we have at the moment. If we remove too much of the text, I think google will dump us down the list again.
Your other suggestions in regards to the highlights and adding a short-word list, we will deffinatly try to do that.
Thank you for the videoreview - it had some good points. My only problem with removing a big part of the text is google. We currently rank #1 on the word "inkasso", and that is proberbly the single most important marketing advantage we have at the moment. If we remove too much of the text, I think google will dump us down the list again.
Your other suggestions in regards to the highlights and adding a short-word list, we will deffinatly try to do that.
I thought now with Google Panda that it reviewed your whole site instead of just the pages?
Vi har lavet lidt flere ændringer nu. Vi har ikke fjernet teksten, idet vi mener den er relevant for emnet. Vi har tænkt, at folk nok læser indtil de er "tilfredse" og så vælger at gå videre til at oprette sig og komme igang med den gratis inkasso. Er det ikke meget logisk resoneret?
Vi har fjernet alle links osv. i menuen til højre, og fået den store blå knap til at følge med ned når man scroller. Vi har også tilføjet nogen call to action knapper i den øverste halvdel af teksten.
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