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Hej alle,

Jeg er ved at skrive en landing page explainer video for vores elektronik-firma, http://www.csselectronics.com/

Den skal være helst under 90 s og på simpel vis introducere vores portefølje af 3 data loggers, som bruge til at logge CAN data fra biler, lastbiler osv. 

Målgruppen er typisk ingeniører.

Det kunne være super fedt at få jeres feedback på nedenstående! Tak! :)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1X6zTpFYFJgV57kbztrooGGD5DlRNKLm2QObEmUymXkQ/edit?usp=sharing

Martin

Introduce the problem and why alternatives suck

[Show car, truck, bus, forklift, factory equipment with data around it]

So here’s the problem: You’d like to analyse data from your car, truck or other CAN bus application.

[Show PC with loggers coming up with red dollar and euro tags, with red x mark coming across]

So you start looking for a CAN analyzer, but they’re all complex, expensive - or lack critical features.

[Show chart in horizon with sun behind - or something]

Getting to that sweet data and insight seems really far off.

Introduce our solution

[Show picture of 3 loggers]

That’s why we developed the simple, powerful and affordable CANLoggerX000 series.

[Visually show the logger being connected via cable to OBD2 port, then a bubble zooming in on the SD card and showing how text files are added. Potentially zoom in on one. Follow-up with a shot of the logger being connected via USB to a PC (2000) or via WiFi (3000) while still being plugged in]

Just connect the logger to the CAN bus and it’ll start recording raw CAN data to the SD card.

With 8GB+ storage you can log a ton of data and extract it via USB or WiFi!

Easy. But also powerful:

[Show the logger to the left and animated text with options coming in in a  cool way]

With the optional free CANvas software, you can easily configure your CANLogger to match your requirements.

[Show a PC with streamed data from Wireshark, with features coming to the left as before]

CANvas also lets you stream CAN bus data through Wireshark, giving you the perfect tool for real-time analysis, diagnostics and reverse engineering.

[Show the log files illustratively as 00005.TXT etc. being crunched through a PC with CANvas and turn into graphs and insight on the other side]

Of course, CANvas also makes it super simple to convert your raw log file data into scaled engineering values. All in a few clicks to give you more time for the fun stuff!

[Show grey, orange, blue backgrounds flipping in via sliding animation, then the loggers pop up & down. Prices fade in and main 4-5 features are shown below]

But the price is the best part. 169 EUR for the CANLogger1000, 229 EUR for the 2000 with real-time clock - and just 399 EUR for the 3000 with WiFi.

[Icons pop up with free software, etc]

With free software, international shipping, support and 2-year warranty.

Testimonials

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See for yourself why hundreds of companies use the CANLoggerX000 - and love it!

[Show the three loggers, link to our website and link to each of the product pages]

Head over to our products page to order your CANLoggerX000 today!